Sunday, August 5, 2012

Six Sentence Sunday #33



Hello again!

Still sharing some snippets from one of my WIPs, tentatively titled A Heart Is A Home.

For those new to this particular story, it's one I started a while back, but haven't really worked on in ages. It's not even completely formulated in my head, but it is the story of Adam Taylor (Jason's friend and lawyer from Love Is The Drug), a free-spirited sort who meets and falls for a thoroughly efficient and just a bit stodgy realtor whom he's hired to sell the home he grew up in after the death of his grandfather.


I'm picking up directly after the last sentence from last week. The first two sentences this week conclude the paragraph from last week's snippet.

 
     He  stepped out of her way and held his arm out in a gesture of welcome. “Come on in.”

     She looked all around, up at the ceilings, down at the floors, and then scratched a quick note on the lined pad of her clipboard with the blue gel roller ball pen she was carrying.

     “Would you like some coffee? I’m just about to make some.”

     She didn’t even glance at him as she moved past him.







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12 comments:

  1. Great attention to detail in this six. I love the slow build that you've got going on here. Nice job!

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  2. Love the dynamic you're setting up between the H & H! Can almost feel his chagrin!

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  3. All business she is. Can't wait to see how that changes.

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  4. Ha, she's giving him the cold shoulder now, but that won't last! Good six.

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  5. A woman who's serious about her work. I like her. Course, now I can't wait to see him ruffle her up a bit. ;) Great six!

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  6. She's all business! I wonder how long that will last? Super six, KE!

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  7. I suspect they could benefit from each other. Wonder if the house will still be standing after they tear down their own walls. ;D

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  8. Great six...I love his relaxed, casual attitude and her serious one...can't wait to see what happens next :)

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  9. Well isn't she Miss No-Nonsense! I bet that's going to change. :) Great characterization for both of them, but hers is just beautifully done. Excellent six, K.E.!

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  10. Oh, she's all business! At least for now, really enjoying this story, can't wait to see what happens next - excellent excerpt!

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  11. Another great six my dear!
    Hugs,
    A

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